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Stark Reflections on Writing and Publishing

Jul 28, 2022

Mark interviews editor Joshua Essoe about the elements of atmosphere, mood, and world-building.

Prior to the main segment, Mark shares a personal update, comments from recent episodes, and a word about this episode's sponsor.

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In their conversation, Mark and Joshua talk about:

  • How Joshua got into being an editor twelve years ago
  • The limitation of only being able to work 1:1 with so many clients at a time and how that led to Joshua deciding to release books (Essoe's Guides to Writing) to assist writers with some of his knowledge/experience
  • The way Joshua divides up a typical day of work, which involves a lot of burning the midnight oil
  • Joshua's unique way of combining two subjects into a single double-sided flip book as a special Kickstarter exclusive project
  • The first flip book - Action Sequences / Sex Scenes
  • The second flip book - Worldbuilding / Mood & Atmosphere
  • The problem with trying to release a flip-book format in the traditional print book market. (Where does the bar code that's supposed to be on the "back" of the book go?)
  • Original artwork from James A. Owen that is part of these books, and this special Kickstarter project
  • The 6 major areas where writers usually have issues in Worldbuilding, including Info-dumping, which is also broken down into 6 types:
    • world-building info dump
    • the back-story info dump
    • the technical info dump
    • dialogue info dump
    • thought info dump
    • emotion info dump
  • How Kevin J. Anderson does a great job of setting up his world in the first several pages of the Dan Shamble, Zombie P.I. novels
  • Three big things that you need to do in your world-building: broadening it, deepening it, and involving it
  • How writers need to shackle their impulse to share too many details about their world all at once to readers
  • A discussion of Tolkien's world-building, which involved a combination of intriguing teaser moments, but also some longer segments of info-dumping
  • What are we talking about when we're talking about Mood and Atmosphere?
  • How there aren't that many books in existence on the topic of mood and atmosphere
  • The way that every aspect of your writing that can contribute to mood
  • How atmosphere is a part of mood, but is a big enough element that it can be understood and explored on its own
  • An excellent example of atmosphere from A Wrinkle in Time
  • How you want to be purposeful when creating and sharing mood in your writing
  • Some of the rewards that are going to be available in Joshua's Kickstarter
  • And more...


After the interview, Mark reflects on a couple of things from the discussion.

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